i tried damn gard to make her more feminie lookin, but i guess i failed. Anywho I did all the test this time, cuz i really wanted to incorporate the CRASSH wave into the forshortened wire. This what she looked like before i fixed her and what the ORIGINAL text you WERENT supposed to see looked like. http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b129/Skabs/page_97copy.jpg
Dave felt that it was too meladramatic. I thought it was very Stan Lee.
Dude chill out. It looks fine. It's obvious that she's very masculine. I've noticed a very significant improvement in the artwork of this comic. Keep up the good work.