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Golden Gate Riot: My new comic book.
  • So I'm working on a new comic book, called Golden Gate Riot. I wrote it, my friend Jeik Dion drew it. My other friend Star St. Germain is doing letters and such.

    Here's the gist of the story:

    Micah is a punk. He's about to flunk out of school and he wants a revolution. In another world, another history, he is a freedom fighter or maybe a terrorist. Most of California is in the hands of La República de la Raza de Aztlan, a Soviet-backed regime determined to take the west coast from the United States, but Micah wants California for the Californians. He wants a new nation of anarchy. No hierarchies. No rulers. If he can inspire a riot in San Francisco, he just might get his wish.

    Here's some previews of the French edition. We're gonna have a website up in the next couple of months and such.

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    P.S. Thanks to Shaloop for the original unused power armor design.
  • That's a really cool art-style; I'll try and check this out.
  • Thanks! I'm super excited about it!
  • do you have someone to publish the comic for you?
  • Nope. Self-publishing, unless you got some kind of hook up. :)
  • I got a buddy of mine who him and a friend of his have been working on a comic for 3 or so years now and I think they went to someone to get it published, but that thing has gone through so many revisions its hard to count.
  • Did it actually get published?
  • That looks amazing, Jeremy. Let me know how I can get ahold of it when it's available.
  • Wow, man.

    I remember you telling me about this 2 years ago, and now to see it come into fruition.......this is REALLY cool. The artwork looks amazing, dude. You pretty much have my readership.
  • Man, that art is fantastic, sign me up. Cool premise, too, though I must say that the persistence of Russia/the Soviets as pop culture villains well into the second decade of the 21st century never ceases to amuse me. Any ideas on when we might get our hands on it?
  • Thanks for the kind words, all. It's going to be coming out this summer. Jeik slammed out the rest of the art so we could slap together the French edition for a con he's going to in Canada (where he lives) in a couple weeks, but the English version is going to have some art tweaks plus pretty extensive background material written by me. The website should be up in a month or two. I'm still deciding if we're gonna sell physical copies from day one or put it online for a bit first or what, but one way or another you'll be able to read the English edition this summer.

    P.S. The Soviets aren't the bad guys, they're just giving the LRRA aid so they will destabilize the US further, much like the US has supported fucked up local regimes in various third world countries in order to destabilize their neighbors.
  • I like your style, will the Soviets have Chinese backers too?

    Great art work by the way.
  • Did it actually get published?



    Last I heard they went to a convention to get it sold or to have some people to look at it, this was about a month ago or so.
  • Why is there a French version?
  • so we could slap together the French edition for a con he's going to in Canada (where he lives)



  • Codger: Nope, the Chinese are not involved this one. I figured much like stupid xenophobic Americans were terrified of the Japanese in '80s, stupid xenophobic Americans are terrified of the Chinese now, so that would be the obvious sci-fi villain, so I went with Mexico instead.

    ZeonicFreak: Hit me up if you get in info on getting our feet in the door with a publisher. Thanks!
  • It's sort of like if the "zoot suit riots" had actually become a popular separatist uprising, due to external influence and support.
  • Yeah, that's more or less the idea. Which reminds me, RB, I need to work out an official timeline and crap. You interested in helping me with that?
  • Sure, you want to work on it Sunday maybe?
  • Looks pretty awesome!
  • Squirrel said:

    so we could slap together the French edition for a con he's going to in Canada (where he lives)





    Thanks I missed that when I was skim reading the older posts.

  • I would really love it if the cover was to be made available in poster form.
  • Assuming I don't get super ill or something Sunday should be cool, RB. Thanks, Dreg! And Blank_Kold, we'll definitely have posters available when we launch the book.
  • Well, having been reading Corey Doctorow's "Content" recently, I'd say putting it up digitally (for free, even, if only just a preview) could very well help sales in the long run, especially if it establishes some buzz.
  • Well it's definitely gonna be available to read online for free... for a while. Not sure if it will be kept online permanently?
  • Very cool. The art looks like a great fit for the story. Looking forward to seeing the finished book!
  • Thanks very much! I have you in the thanks to section of the book, too. :)
  • I just heard from Jeik that he sold 30 copies of the French edition of Golden Gate Riot at a con in Canada! Super excited!
  • Good news about the sales!

    I'm looking forward to seeing if anyone gets on our case about the war-nerd stuff. (I did realize afterwards that the Mexican Invasion we created was basically the Korean War only in California instead of the Korean peninsula.)
  • Well we've already got the robot nerds on our case, so probably.
  • haha, where are they doing this? Twitter? (Has anyone mentioned Dorvack yet?)
  • http://toyboxdx.com/phorum/read.php?5,243658

    People like to talk about Votoms, mostly.
  • Color me interested Karaoke. I will be buying a copy when it comes in English :D
  • Thanks! I'll keep you in the loop, folks. The website should be launching in a month or two.
  • Very interested in this
  • Thanks, TheMarkSewell! I'll keep you all updated!

    P.S. I'm up to page eighteen in my script for a new GGR-related... thing.
  • Annnd that script is donnnne.
  • Here's a little preview from a short Golden Gate Riot side story that is going to be in the back of the comic when it comes out. As usual, it's written by me, drawn by Jeik Dion.

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  • Is that the tank you wanted us to suggest, or is that going to be another comic book?
  • Jeik just did a bunch of research and made up his own tank based on various tanks he thought were cool. We may do more tank crap later but whatever, he did fine without me telling him what to do. :)
  • Sanjeev is gonna give you guys soooooo much shit for that design.
  • He gave us 0% shit for that design. He said, "I saw that sample page you posted...very cool. I also like the tank design. I'm a big tank geek, so that especially appeals to me."
  • ...wow, just wow. Do you want me to complain about it or are you not really interested? ;)
  • Go ahead and complain?
  • There can be complaints about a tank blowing shit up?
  • Ooo! Oo! Can I guess what the complaints will be?
    1) The coaxially mounted guns in the turret are too big and unecessary and would take up too much internal space in the turret.
    2) The bottom of the front hull should just be smooth armor plate. I'm guessing the phrase "shot trap" will be used. : )

    Nice art once again. That's really cool you guys are already doing side stories for this.

  • I'm assuming it comes from a tank like this: http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/5/5a/Leclerc-IMG_1746.jpg

    I'm not sure too big is a real problem since it's a comic and exaggeration and all is part and parcel of a comic, but the shot trap thing I will bring up.
  • Okay, to start out with, I think the drawing looks great and there's nothing that says "oh god this is horribly wrong and you will be embarrassed to print it". I mean, the tank *is* shooting a guy in a robot suit so clearly this is not the same world we're used to. And it's not like there haven't been completely-weird armored vehicle designs before.

    Anyway; yeah the front is kind of bad, and so are the turret sides (it looks like the artist was inspired by the British "Crusader" and "Churchill" tanks.)

    As shaloop says, the side guns are weird. They're too big to be machine guns or light cannon, too short to be useful anti-tank guns, and too small to be howitzers. Generally, if you have more than one of the same kind of gun you're using them for antiaircraft fire (where you need to put a whole shitload of bullets into the air really fast), but those are also usually machine guns (which have narrower barrels than you've shown.) If you're shooting at things on the ground, having more guns usually just means you run out of bullets that much faster. Sometimes armored vehicles have a howitzer (fires a large explosive shell at low velocity, used for demolition or city-fighting) instead of an anti-tank gun, but that would be a bigger diameter than depicted (it would be about the same size as the tank gun.) Here's an example: Sturmpanzer. However, you generally wouldn't combine both that and an anti-tank function (long gun) in one vehicle because then you have to carry two different types of ammunition.

    Having one of them on either side of the big gun means your loader is going to have a tough time getting to the main gun, although if you're using an autoloader that's less of a problem (although autoloaders have their own issues with mechanical complexity.)

    The whole front of the turret is guns; where does the gunner sit so he can see out?

    In fact, it would be annoying to try and aim those; do they converge at some point or do they just shoot straight? What happens if a target is only in line with one gun; what's the use of the other one? Also, you now have to align and boresight (line up the gunsights) for three guns, instead of only two. Sure, you could say 'well this gun is just to cause general destruction' but that's what artillery barrages are for.

    There have been multi-turret, multi-gun designs before (the American M3 Grant/Lee type) but they weren't particularly successful, because the small gun was too big to be a good anti-infantry or anti-aircraft weapon, but too small to be useful against armored vehicles.
  • Well this is a Mexican army tank (well, LRRA) and in the scenario we've developed I don't think it's unrealistic to suggest they may have some unsuccessful designs in the field. I guess what I would be looking to "fix" are things that can't work more than things that are just badly designed.
  • And, like I said, it's not so much "can't work" as "badly designed", and if it's supposed to be Soviet-type stuff they're legendary for making bad design choices (not that American stuff doesn't have bad design either.) Incidentally, Soviet tanks use an autoloader, so packing three guns side-by-side is more likely to work in their design.